Thursday, 30 August 2018

A Poem

It’s Saturday at dads
I’m actually really  glad
We sit to watch a movie  
It’s favourite it’s the  goodies !


Just A short Poem that i wrote at school.
Its about the weekends When i went to go visit my Dad .

Thank you Mrs Tele’a for helping me write my poem.

2 comments:

  1. Malo lelei,Aretafaye I really like this poem that you did about what you did on saturday I hope you can make some longer ones about what you do around the house or what you do in the hoilday's or what you would do on a normal day... Keep up the good work
    From yours kindly regarded - Tatiana Akurangi

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  2. Kia ora areta,
    i really liked your poem i think you did great i also
    really liked how the poem was about what you did in the
    weekends.
    Great job
    -hilary

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